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Hi jane, thank you for your advice. It is really helpful for me !!!! It is really hard to choose between them. However, you gave me a way to go forward. Thank you again!!! Here is my homework! Topic : Does age matter in relationship? I think that age doesn't matter in relationship. Love is much more important than age. However, It is not easy to have relationship between woman and man whose age gap is too much bigger in korea. Koreans are very conservative, especially about relationship. In my point of view, If both can share ideas and match up well. That relationship is much wiser than ordinary one. Probably, we can see how much the rate of divorse change sharply. In short, If there is love, age doesn't matter in relationship.

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Thank you for your composition today. You did a great job in putting your thoughts into this composition. Well, I really hope that my advice is of great help to you. It may be a dilemma, but the secret to that is to follow your heart\'s desire. It\'s good to ask for advice from your friends, but don\'t let them decide for you. Listen to yourself and you\'ll know what you really want. I wish you good luck and happiness. Anyway, I agree that age doesn\'t matter in relationships. It\'s a matter of loving and understanding each other. There may be difference in beliefs in every generation, but this bridge can be crossed by love. Take care and have a stress-free day! I\'ll call you later.

T. JanE ^^

Hi jane, thank you for your advice.

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It is really helpful for me !!!!

>> Correct

It is really hard to choose between them.

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However, you gave me a way to go forward.

>> Correct

Thank you again!!!

>> Correct

Here is my homework!

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Topic : Does age matter in relationship?

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I think that age doesn\'t matter in relationship.

>> I think that age doesn\'t matter in relationships.

Love is much more important than age.

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However, It is not easy to have relationship between woman and man whose age gap is too much bigger in korea.

>> However, it is not easy to be in a relationship with someone whose age gap is so big in Korea.

Koreans are very conservative, especially about relationship.

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In my point of view, If both can share ideas and match up well. That relationship is much wiser than ordinary one.

>> In my point of view, if both can chare ideas and can match up well, their relationship is much better than an ordinary one.

Probably, we can see how much the rate of divorse change sharply.

>> Probably, we can see how divorce rate chages sharply.

In short, if there is love, age doesn\'t matter in relationship.

>> Correct

Love is much more important than age. gt;