Composition: In 7 sentences, describe a city you have visited and impressed you so much. Why was it

2014-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I visited Seoul a few months ago. There are busy people a lot that place. I am jealous them because I am a bumming around. Also there are many famous restaurant above in Ulsan. I like that I eat tasty food. sorry I did not make 7 sentences.

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Hi there, Bea! Thank you for doing your homework. Don\'t worry, it doesn\'t matter whether you constructed seven sentences or not. I appreciate your effort. Keep it up! Have a nice day~ ~Kelly^^ I visited Seoul a few months ago. >> Correct. >> or: I went to Seoul a few months ago.There are busy people a lot that place. >> There are a lot of busy people in that place. >> Most of the people in the place are busy.I am jealous them because I am a bumming around. >> I was jelaous because I was a bum.Also there are many famous restaurant above in Ulsan. >>Also, there are many famous restaurants in Ulsan.I like that I eat tasty food. >> I like tasty foods.sorry I did not make 7 sentences. >> Correct.

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