Composition: In 7 sentences, describe a city you have visited and impressed you so much. Why was it
학생이 쓴 원문
I visited Seoul a few months ago.
There are busy people a lot that place.
I am jealous them because I am a bumming around.
Also there are many famous restaurant above in Ulsan.
I like that I eat tasty food.
sorry I did not make 7 sentences.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Bea!
Thank you for doing your homework. Don\'t worry, it doesn\'t matter whether you constructed seven sentences or not. I appreciate your effort. Keep it up! Have a nice day~
~Kelly^^
I visited Seoul a few months ago.
>> Correct.
>> or: I went to Seoul a few months ago.There are busy people a lot that place.
>> There are a lot of busy people in that place.
>> Most of the people in the place are busy.I am jealous them because I am a bumming around.
>> I was jelaous because I was a bum.Also there are many famous restaurant above in Ulsan.
>>Also, there are many famous restaurants in Ulsan.I like that I eat tasty food.
>> I like tasty foods.sorry I did not make 7 sentences.
>> Correct.
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