Composition making!Check page 63 - A of you book and use the details their in creating a good story.

<Story Time> Andy,Jack,Sam went to the mesuem to see a famous earthquake exhibition."What a excellent picture are there."said Jack."I think they feel very scare when earthquake occur."said Andy."I hope do not occur earthquake."said Sam."After they saw a earthquake exhibition.They went restuarnt to eat some dessert."It was a good exhibition."said Jack."I will participate the other exhibition next month"said Andy."Me too."said Sam.They ate chocolate and juice.Then,they went playground to play baseball."Andy you are very good at baseball."said Jack."Thank you." An hour ago they went home to take a rest."See a next time."said everone.

Hi [이름],   I hope things are going well on you today. I hope Tuesday is treating  you right. Anyways, please take note of the corrections I have done on your composition.  Please be more cautious on your spellings. Take note of the correct use of the articles: a/an/the. When events have happened in the past it is always stated using the past form of the verb.  Remember to use your prepositions whenever in need to connect your verb to the article \"the\" in a sentence Observe the correct use of the different punctuation marks such as comma, or  a question mark (?) is used to convey a query statement. It is always a rule of thumb to observe a subject and a verb in a complete sentence. Oh well, [이름] I hope the aforementioned errors will help you better. It is always my pleasure to correct your ccompistion. Have a great night. Take care always. xoxo Teacher Liza Composition making!Check page 63 - A of you book and use the details their in creating a good story. >> Composition making! Check page 63-A of your book and use the details there in creating a good story. Story Time>Andy,Jack,Sam went to the mesuem to see a famous earthquake exhibition. >>Andy, Jack and Sam went to the musuem to see a famous earthquake exhibition. \"What a excellent picture are there.\"said Jack.\"I think they feel very scare when earthquake occur.\"said Andy. >>What an excellent pictures are these?.\" said Jack.  \" I think they feel very scared when the earthqauke occured\", said Andy. \"I hope do not occur earthquake.\"said Sam.\" YOU MEAN TO SAY:\" I hope the earthqauke will not happen again\", said Sam. After they saw a earthquake exhibition. >> After they have seen the earthqauke exhibition. They went restuarnt to eat some dessert. CORRECT [check spelling: restaurant] \"It was a good exhibition.\"said Jack. CORRECT \"I will participate on the other exhibition next month\"said Andy. >>\" I will participate on the other exhibition next month\", said Andy. \"Me too.\"said Sam. >>CORRECT [check use of punctuation mark: [\"ME TOO\", said Sam.] They ate chocolate and juice. CORRECT Then,they went playground to play baseball. >>Then, they went to the playground to play baseball. \"Andy you are very good at baseball.\"said Jack. CORRECT \"Thank you.\" >>\"Thank you\", Jack said. An hour ago they went home to take a rest >>YOU MEAN TO SAY: After an hour they went home to take a rest.