composition of my favorite sport

2010-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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my favorite sport is Badminton. i first met Badminton when i was 11. my friend teach me so i can play and enjoy Badminton. when we play Badminton, we just need racket , Badminton ball and net. the game rule is so simple.just hit the ball with racket. Badminton is so easy but their are a lot of skills and physical strength . there are two people who won the medal of the in Badminton Olympic Games. i'm surprized and felt proud.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Paul..;0) The composition you made was very impressive!^^ You were able to describe your favorite sport which is Badminton.. Im really glad to know that youre happy in doing so..;0) Just continue what youre doing and I know, you will be much much better than now in no time... Its me.. Teacher Cam my favorite sport is Badminton. >>correct!i first met Badminton when i was 11. >>I first played badminton when I was 11.my friend teach me so i can play and enjoy Badminton. >>My friend taught me how to play badminton and I really enjoy it!;)when we play Badminton, we just need racket , Badminton ball and net. >>correct!the game rule is so simple.just hit the ball with racket. >>correct!Badminton is so easy but their are a lot of skills and physical strength . >>Badminton is quite so easy to play but it needs lot of skills and physical strength.there are two people who won the medal of the in Badminton Olympic Games. >>There are 2 people who garnered medals during the Olympic Gamei'm surprized and felt proud. >>Im surprized and felt so porud for that..

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