composition of my favorite sport
학생이 쓴 원문
my favorite sport is Badminton.
i first met Badminton when i was 11.
my friend teach me so i can play and enjoy Badminton.
when we play Badminton, we just need racket , Badminton ball and net.
the game rule is so simple.just hit the ball with racket.
Badminton is so easy but their are a lot of skills and physical strength .
there are two people who won the medal of the in Badminton
Olympic Games.
i'm surprized and felt proud.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Paul..;0)
The composition you made was very impressive!^^ You were able to describe your favorite sport which is Badminton..
Im really glad to know that youre happy in doing so..;0)
Just continue what youre doing and I know, you will be much much better than now in no time...
Its me..
Teacher Cam
my favorite sport is Badminton.
>>correct!i first met Badminton when i was 11.
>>I first played badminton when I was 11.my friend teach me so i can play and enjoy Badminton.
>>My friend taught me how to play badminton and I really enjoy it!;)when we play Badminton, we just need racket , Badminton ball and net.
>>correct!the game rule is so simple.just hit the ball with racket.
>>correct!Badminton is so easy but their are a lot of skills and physical strength .
>>Badminton is quite so easy to play but it needs lot of skills and physical strength.there are two people who won the medal of the in Badminton Olympic Games.
>>There are 2 people who garnered medals during the Olympic Gamei'm surprized and felt proud.
>>Im surprized and felt so porud for that..
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