Composition: parents are the best teachers

2013-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

I strongly agree that parents are the best teachers. Without quoting specific researches or statistics, we are all well aware that children learn from their parents how to walk, ho to speak, and how to have good manners before they become adults. More than even the professional teachers that we have in school, parents are generally the most involved in the development and education of children. Almost for sure parents are the best teachers at the beginning of their children’s lives, which actually corresponds to the parents' role in nature. Parents are most committed and involved in teaching their children. Children learn from their parents not only knowledge, but also they take implicit learning as they unconsciously copy some of their parents' habits and styles of behavior. So we as parents should be conscious that our behavior, philosophy, and way of thing greatly influence them in developing their personality and being a responsible and indpedent adults.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Sir [이름]^^ It\'s a happy Friday!! I know that you are really waiting for this day. Thank you very much for sending this in.^^ Parents are really important. They are the ones who taught us a lot of things in life. I hope that you will have a great weekend! See you in classs! If you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class.Teacher Nina I strongly agree that parents are the best teachers. >> Correct! Without quoting specific researches or statistics, we are all well aware that children learn from their parents how to walk, ho to speak, and how to have good manners before they become adults. >> Without quoting specific researches or statistics, we are all aware that children learn from their parents such as how to walk, how to speak, and how to have good manners before they become adults. More than even the professional teachers that we have in school, parents are generally the most involved in the development and education of children. >> Did you mean: Parents are generally the most involved persons in the development and education of their children even more than the professional teachers that we have in school. Almost for sure parents are the best teachers at the beginning of their children’s lives, which actually corresponds to the parents\' role in nature. >> It is for sure that parents are the best teachers at the beginning of their children\'s lives, which actually corresponds to parents\' role in nature. Parents are most committed and involved in teaching their children. >> Parents are the most committed and involved people in teaching their children. Children learn from their parents not only knowledge, but also they take implicit learning as they unconsciously copy some of their parents\' habits and styles of behavior. >> Children learn from their parents not only knowledge, but they also take implicit learning as they unconsciously copy some of their parents\' habits and styles. OR >> Children learn from their parents not only knowledge, but they also take implicit learning as they unconsciously copy some of their parents\' behavior. So we as parents should be conscious that our behavior, philosophy, and way of thing greatly influence them in developing their personality and being a responsible and indpedent adults. >> So we as parents, should be conscious with our behavior, philosophy, and way of thinking that will greatly influence them in developing their personality, being responsible and independent adults.

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