Composition: Reincarnation

No, I do not believe in re-incarnation. Reincarnation is the religious or philosophical concept that the soul or spirit, after biological death, begins a new life in a new body that may be human, animal or spiritual depending on the moral quality of the previous life's actions. This doctrine is a central tenet of many religions. The doctrine is the strongest and powerful mean to control people and to have them follow their tenet and god. One of the basic instincts men have is to pursue the eternity and life instinct. People want to live longer and forever. This is the reason why almost all religions insist reincarnation or emphasize that there is another life after death. Although things are happening which cannot be explained by the name of science, there is no concrete evidence that incarnation actually happens. Rather than we rely on our second life or reincarnation, we need to focus on our current lives, do good for others, love our neighbors, and help the under-privileged.

Hello Sir [이름]^^ A wonderful Thursday to you. Thank you for alloting some time to do your composition. Your ideas are greatly appreciated. You were able to share your opinions well. Fantastic! You were able to use new expresssions that led to marvelous sentences and ideas. Keep your ideas flowing. I am so proud of you. Your writing skills are improving! Keep it up! Let\'s talk more about this in class. See you! Have a great day! Teacher Nina No, I do not believe in re-incarnation. >> Correct! Reincarnation is the religious or philosophical concept that the soul or spirit, after biological death, begins a new life in a new body that may be human, animal or spiritual depending on the moral quality of the previous life\'s actions. >> Correct! This doctrine is a central tenet of many religions. >> This doctrine is the central tenet of many religions. The doctrine is the strongest and powerful mean to control people and to have them follow their tenet and god. >> This doctrine is the strongest and most powerful means to control people and to have them follow their tenet and God. One of the basic instincts men have is to pursue the eternity and life instinct. >> One of the basic instincts men have is to pursue eternity and life instinct. >> Or did you mean: One of the basic instincts men has is to pursue immortality. People want to live longer and forever. >> Correct >> OR: People want to live longer and have an eternal life. This is the reason why almost all religions insist reincarnation or emphasize that there is another life after death. >> This is the reason why almost all religions insist about reincarnation or emphasize that there is another life after death. Although things are happening which cannot be explained by the name of science, there is no concrete evidence that incarnation actually happens. >> Although there are things/happenings/events which cannot be explained by science, there is no concrete evidence that reincarnation actually happens. >> Or: Although there are things/happenings/events which cannot be explained by the most reliable source, by the name of science, there is no concrete evidence that reincarnation actually happens. Rather than we rely on our second life or reincarnation, we need to focus on our current lives, do good for others, love our neighbors, and help the under-privileged. >> Instead of/Rather than relying on our second life or reincarnation, we should focus on our current lives, do good to others, love our neighbors and help the under- priviledged.