Composition: should be forced to learn a foreign language?
학생이 쓴 원문
I do not think that immigrants should be forced to learn that country’s language because even without being compelled to learn the country’s language, he/she will naturally make efforts by himself/herself to pick up the language to adapt to the new environments and get settled in the society. Necessity is the mother of invention. If he/she wants to get a job, be successful, get along with other local residents, he/she will definitely strive to learn the language. Especially in case of young kids, they go to school and they will eventually become fluent in speaking the country’s language although in order for them to reach the level, they might have to go through tough times. Immigrants have the right to choose if they want to learn the language. They should make their choice. They don’t have to be forced to learn it. Instead, the local governments and communities can offer free language classes so that they can voluntarily participate in such programs.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Sir [이름]^^
Happy Friday! T.G.I.F!! It\'s your favorite day! I am so happy that your writing skills is really improving. You opinions today is really great! You got it! Immigrants should not be forced to learn a language. They should be the one who will choose what they want. It is important to learn a new language to be more flexible and to be exposed to new opportunities. Let\'s talk more about this in class. See you!
Teacher Nina
I do not think that immigrants should be forced to learn that country’s language because even without being compelled to learn the country’s language, he/she will naturally make efforts by himself/herself to pick up the language to adapt to the new environments and get settled in the society.
>> I do not think that immigrants should be forced to learn that country\'s language because even without being compelled to learn the country\'s language, he/she will naturally make an effort by himself/herself to learn the language, to adapt to the new environment and to get settled in the society.
Necessity is the mother of invention.
>> Correct!
If he/she wants to get a job, be successful, get along with other local residents, he/she will definitely strive to learn the language.
>> If he/she wants to get a job, to be successful, to get along with other local residents, he/she will definitely strive to learn the language.
Especially in case of young kids, they go to school and they will eventually become fluent in speaking the country’s language although in order for them to reach the level, they might have to go through tough times.
>> Especially in the case of young kids, they go to school and they will eventually become fluent in speaking the country\'s language although in order for them to reach their goal, they might have to go through tough times.
Immigrants have the right to choose if they want to learn the language.
>> Correct!
They should make their choice.
>> Correct!
They don’t have to be forced to learn it.
>> Correct!
Instead, the local governments and communities can offer free language classes so that they can voluntarily participate in such programs.
>> Correct!
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