Composition: success or luck

Without a doubt, hard work is the first and primary condition to succeed. But hard-working itself does not always results in success. In order to succeed, luck plays a significant role. Let’s look at your company. There was a CEO who newly joined in your company. He worked so hard like 24 hours a day even without sleeping to boost sales, however, all of sudden the Lehman Brothers case broke out and the global economy was severely affected, which resulted in the 50% drop in sales. Now, the other case is that there is a sales director who joined a year ago. His talent, leadership, competency was not outstanding, but just on average. Now, due to the surge of the fuel price, demand for diesel products soared and the company rolled out the products that had been developed a few years ago and the sales hit the record high. The other instance is that a man who has a good relationship with his boss gets promoted regardless of his talent or competency. In the real world, luck is impo

Hi there Sir [이름]! I really appreciate your time doing your homework. Keep up the good attitude! I am so blessed to have you as my student. You are right! Luck is also a part but if you are going to work hard with it, you will be really a successful person. You opinions are greatly appreciated! Take Care! See you in class! Keep on writing! Teacher Nina Without a doubt, hard work is the first and primary condition to succeed. >> Without a doubt, hard work is the first and primary aspect to succeed. But hard-working itself does not always results in success. >> But being hard-working itself does not always result to success. In order to succeed, luck plays a significant role. >> Correct! Let’s look at your company. >> Correct! OR >> Let us take a look at your company. There was a CEO who newly joined in your company. >> There was a CEO who newly joined your company. He worked so hard like 24 hours a day even without sleeping to boost sales, however, all of sudden the Lehman Brothers case broke out and the global economy was severely affected, which resulted in the 50% drop in sales. >> He worked so hard like 24 hours a day even without sleeping to boost sales. However, all of a sudden the Lehman Brothers case broke out and the global economy was severely affected, which resulted to 50% drop in sales. Now, the other case is that there is a sales director who joined a year ago. >> Now, on the other hand, there was a sales director who joined a year ago. His talent, leadership, competency was not outstanding, but just on average. >> His talent, leadership skills, and competency were not outstanding, just on the average. Now, due to the surge of the fuel price, demand for diesel products soared and the company rolled out the products that had been developed a few years ago and the sales hit the record high. >> Now, due to the surge of the fuel price, demand for diesel products soared and the company rolled out the products that had been developed a few years ago and the sales hit a high record. The other instance is that a man who has a good relationship with his boss gets promoted regardless of his talent or competency. >> Another instance is that a man who has a good relationship with his boss gets promoted regardless of his talent or competency. In the real world, luck is impo >> Did you mean: In the real world, luck is important.