Composition task

2019-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

학생이 쓴 원문

As you know, bylaw of our Company, Improving a language skill is one of duties of employees. I have studied for my English qualification for last 2 months. But I need more time to complete it. It will take about 1 month to get the certificate. One month is a long time and during this time, I couldn\'t afford to do heavy tasks. I\'m so sorry for that. So I would like to suggest giving up my next holiday and I will do overtime work for 2 weeks after I finish. If I acquire English well, it will be a great help in our business. The qualification is also a important thing in my carrier. Please allow me to do this. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^


Happy Thursday :)

You are doing very well. Just like what I always say. Let\'s work together to meet your goal.

You will be all right.

We\'ll talk tomorrow...\\m/...


T. Lainey <\",)))><


As you know, bylaw of our Company, Improving a language skill is one of duties of employees.

>>> As you know by law of our Company, improving our language skill is one of our requirement as an employee.


I have studied for my English qualification for last 2 months.

>>> I have studied for my English qualification for the last 2 months.



But I need more time to complete it.

>>> correct


It will take about 1 month to get the certificate.

>>> correct


One month is a long time and during this time, I couldn\'t afford to do heavy tasks.

>>> correct


I\'m so sorry for that.

>>> correct


So I would like to suggest giving up my next holiday and I will do overtime work for 2 weeks after I finish.

>>> So, I might need to give up my next holiday to do overtime work for 2 weeks after I am done.


If I acquire English well, it will be a great help in our business.

>>> If I will be able to get better in English, it will be a great help in our business.


The qualification is also a important thing in my carrier.

>>> The qualification is also an important thing in my career.


 Please allow me to do this.

>>> correct


Thank you.

>>> correct

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