Composition task
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Su ^^
Happy Thursday :)
You are doing very well. Just like what I always say. Let\'s work together to meet your goal.
You will be all right.
We\'ll talk tomorrow...\\m/...
T. Lainey <\",)))><
As you know, bylaw of our Company, Improving a language skill is one of duties of employees.
>>> As you know by law of our Company, improving our language skill is one of our requirement as an employee.
I have studied for my English qualification for last 2 months.
>>> I have studied for my English qualification for the last 2 months.
But I need more time to complete it.
>>> correct
It will take about 1 month to get the certificate.
>>> correct
One month is a long time and during this time, I couldn\'t afford to do heavy tasks.
>>> correct
I\'m so sorry for that.
>>> correct
So I would like to suggest giving up my next holiday and I will do overtime work for 2 weeks after I finish.
>>> So, I might need to give up my next holiday to do overtime work for 2 weeks after I am done.
If I acquire English well, it will be a great help in our business.
>>> If I will be able to get better in English, it will be a great help in our business.
The qualification is also a important thing in my carrier.
>>> The qualification is also an important thing in my career.
Please allow me to do this.
>>> correct
Thank you.
>>> correct
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