Composition: the face to face communication is better than other types of communication?
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Face to face communication is better than phone calls. I often experienced that talks or discussions over the phone call can lead to a situation where you might conflict with each other when discussing a serious issue. So when you discuss a really important issue, I recommend that you visit the other and discuss face to face. By doing that, you can avoid misunderstanding and can read what the other is thinking or feeling by looking at his/her face. You can figure out his sincerity and truthfulness when you talk face to face. However, a letter or email sometimes is much more effective than the face to face communication. It is not only because it’s convenient and fast, but you can express your thoughts and feeling in more organized way. A letter can contain your inner feeling and emotion. Think about love letters you wrote to your significant the other and an apology letter to your business partner or a friend. A letter sometimes is worth than thousand words.
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Face to face communication is better than phone calls.
>> Correct!
I often experienced that talks or discussions over the phone call can lead to a situation where you might conflict with each other when discussing a serious issue.
>> I often experienced having a conversation or discussions over the phone and it can lead to a situation where you might have a conflict with each other when discussing a serious issue.
OR >> >> I often experienced having a conversation or discussions over the phone and it can lead to a situation where you might have a conflict with each other when discussing a serious matter.
So when you discuss a really important issue, I recommend that you visit the other and discuss face to face.
>> So when you discuss a really important issue, I recommend that you visit the other and to discuss it face to face.
OR >> So when you discuss a really important issue, I recommend that you visit the other and discuss it in person.
By doing that, you can avoid misunderstanding and can read what the other is thinking or feeling by looking at his/her face.
>> By doing that, you can avoid misunderstanding and you can read what the other is thinking or feeling by looking at his/her face.
OR >> >> By doing that, you can avoid misunderstanding and you can read what the other\'s thinking and feeling by merely looking at his/her gestures.
You can figure out his sincerity and truthfulness when you talk face to face.
>> You can feel his sincerity and truthfulness when you talk in person.
However, a letter or email sometimes is much more effective than the face to face communication.
>> However, a letter or an email sometimes is much more effective than face to face communication.
OR >> However, a letter or an email sometimes is much more effective than face to face communication.
It is not only because it’s convenient and fast, but you can express your thoughts and feeling in more organized way.
>> It is not only because it\'s convenient and fast, but you can express your thoughts and feelings in a more organized way.
A letter can contain your inner feeling and emotion.
>> A letter contains your feelings, and emotions.
Think about love letters you wrote to your significant the other and an apology letter to your business partner or a friend.
>> Think about the love letter you wrote to your significant other and an apology letter to your business partner or a friend.
A letter sometimes is worth than thousand words.
>> A letter is sometimes worth far more than a thousand words.
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