composition: traits to be a good friend
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In my case, I like a person who is reliable, sincere, polite, honest, trustworthy, and respect others. I do not like a person who has a big mouth, rude, and look down others. The same criteria apply to building a friendship. Of them, the most important and essential characteristic is reliability because if I can't trust a friend and he is not loyal towards me, we cannot be real friends at all. If he would talk about me behind my back then, no matter how much fun he is, he should never really be considered a good friend. In addition, people can be polite and kind at the moment. People can pretend to be a good person for a while, but being a consistent person in terms of being reliable is not easy. It can often take a few years before people consider someone a good friend, as it is difficult to really get to know someone in a short length of time. His reliability could be proven after you spend long time with him, sharing good and bad times.
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Hi there again Sir [이름]^^
All of the charcteristics you\'ve mentioned is really important in building any kind of relationship. It is not easy to trust a person, we should know how to choose our friends. They should be the people who will be there in good and bad times. I am sure that you have a lot of friends, Can you tell me about them in class. See you!
Teacher Nina
In my case, I like a person who is reliable, sincere, polite, honest, trustworthy, and respect others.
>> In my case, I like a person who is reliable, sincere, polite, honest, trustworthy and who knows how to respect others.
I do not like a person who has a big mouth, rude, and look down others.
>> I do not like a person who has a big mouth, rude and looks down into others.
The same criteria apply to building a friendship.
>> The same criteria applies when building a relationship.
Of them, the most important and essential characteristic is reliability because if I can\'t trust a friend and he is not loyal towards me, we cannot be real friends at all.
>> Correct!
If he would talk about me behind my back then, no matter how much fun he is, he should never really be considered a good friend.
>> If he would talk about me behind my back then, no matter how much fun he is to be with, he should never really be considered a good friend.
In addition, people can be polite and kind at the moment.
>> Correct!
People can pretend to be a good person for a while, but being a consistent person in terms of being reliable is not easy.
>> Correct!
It can often take a few years before people consider someone a good friend, as it is difficult to really get to know someone in a short length of time.
>> It can often take a few years before people consider someone a good friend, it is difficult to really know someone in a short span of time.
His reliability could be proven after you spend long time with him, sharing good and bad times.
>> His reliability could be proven after you spend a long time with him, sharing good and bad times together.
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