Composition: what subject you like to study

2013-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I would like to study marketing because the heart of business success lies in its marketing. Most aspects of business depend on successful marketing. The overall marketing umbrella covers developing a new product, advertising, public relations, promotions and sales. Marketing is a process by which a product or service is introduced and promoted to potential customers. Without marketing, a company may offer the best products or services in its industry, but none of its potential customers would know about it. Without marketing, sales may crash and companies may have to close. I have studied electronic and electric engineering in the university, so I have not had an opportunity to study the subject. Although I could get a glimpse of marketing while I was in MBA course at the graduate school, it was not enough for me to be specialized in marketing. Marketing is the subject that you can actually see the tangible results through sales figures by developing and implementing your plans.

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Hello there Sir ^^ Wow! Marketing! I heard that this subject is a bit difficult. As you\'ve mentioned, there are a lot of things to be studied and to be familiarized with. I do agree with you, even though a company provides the best services if the customers don\'t know about it, it will not be successful. Let\'s talk more about this in class. See you! Teacher Nina I would like to study marketing because the heart of business success lies in its marketing. >> I would like to study marketing because the heart of a business success lies in its marketing. Most aspects of business depend on successful marketing. >> Most aspects of business depends on a successful marketing. The overall marketing umbrella covers developing a new product, advertising, public relations, promotions and sales. >> Correct! Marketing is a process by which a product or service is introduced and promoted to potential customers. >> Correct! Without marketing, a company may offer the best products or services in its industry, but none of its potential customers would know about it. >> Correct! >> OR: Without marketing, a company may offer the best products or services in its industry, but none of its potential customers would be informed about it. Without marketing, sales may crash and companies may have to close. >> Without marketing, sales may crash and companies might close. I have studied electronic and electric engineering in the university, so I have not had an opportunity to study the subject. >> I have studied electronic and electric engineering in the university, so I didn\'t have the opportunity to study the subject. Although I could get a glimpse of marketing while I was in MBA course at the graduate school, it was not enough for me to be specialized in marketing. >> Although I could get a glimpse of marketing while I was in MBA course at the graduate school, it was not enough for me to specialize marketing. Marketing is the subject that you can actually see the tangible results through sales figures by developing and implementing your plans. >> Correct!

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