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2012-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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-Enforce:Many incidents were reported in the course of enforcing the new law which ban smoking in public. -Implementation: Government is struggling with implementation of new law because of the lack of understanding.

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Hello there [이름],                Thank you for taking time to fdo your homework. Keep up the good work See you!   -Enforce:Many incidents were reported in the course of enforcing the new law which ban smoking in public.>>Correct-Implementation: The government is struggling with implementation of new law because of the lack of understanding. >>Correct

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