Composition Writing

I appreciate the effort you put into accomp[이름]hing this!

I totally agree with your opinion. I hope that you will continue to share your opinions through writing for this will help you improve

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~Teacher Shanee^^,

we have to protect them because through the natural beauty we can see and learn the importance of natural beauty which is not in the man made such as buildings and city centers.
>>> We have to protect them because through them, we can experience and learn the importance of natural beauty which is not present in man-made tings such as buildings and city centers.
And we can learn new things through natural beauty spots and cultural assets.
>>> Correct!
The best way to protect them is keeping them as it is with ever growing urban centers.
>>> The best was to protect then is to keep them as they are.
It is unavoidable to build centers in order to development.
>>> It is unavoidable to build centers in order to develop a place.
So I think that it is neccessary to be in harmony between urban centers and natural beauty spots.
>>> So I think it is necessary to keep the harmony between urban centers and natural beauty spots.
And government have to remind people about the the importance of natural beauty to protect them.

>>> And the government has to remind the people about the importance of natural beauty and that they should protect them.