Composition Writing: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a l

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==Teacher Charlie==

Undoubtedly, Many people should work on company to live our society. Accordingly, there are some people saying that only people who earn a lot of money are successful, and I totally disagree with this view for the following reasons.
 >> Undoubtedly, it is important to earn money to be able to afford the standard of living in today\'s society and some people would define success as having plenty of money. However, I disagree with this belief for a couple of reasons.

The main reason that support my view is that criteria of success differ from each other. To be specific, a man who are in poverty can be a successful person. because he has two sons and his sons grow well.

Another important reason is that there are many success factor in our society. To be more, people who awarded in academic subject can be a successful person. they are respected from others due to this achievement. It make people more conveniently and comfortable.
>> My main reason is that the definition of success  varies from person to person. For example, a poor man can say he is successful because he was able to raise his sons righteously. Another reason is that success can be measured in a multitude of ways wherein a person who has achieved academic excellence can be considered successful in his field.

 To conclude from the above. I can assume only people who earn a lot of money can\'t be a succesful. duo to the fact that there are a lot of criteria of success and factor of success.

>> In conclusion, I don\'t agree that only the people who earn a lot of money can be considered successful because it depends on a person\'s definition of success.