compositions using the word \'Wish\' and the word \'Hope\'

2022-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

Thanks for breaking your rule about no homework on Fridays. I want to expose myself to English as much as possible to improve my English. I am really grateful for your understanding me. Thanks. 1. Wish - I wish that I lived with great heroes in the Bible. - My father wished that he had been much wiser enough to make a lot of money in his youth. - He left after saying to us, \"Wish me luck\" 2. Hope - He is hoping for a promotion. - We hope to see you soon - I hope that the economy will come around soon.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday!^^

Thank you for accomplishing your composition, Steve! ^__^)

I have made some modifications that you can review later on.

I will talk to you again on Monday. Have a fun weekend!

__Teacher Mayleen :)

Thanks for breaking your rule about no homework on Fridays.

>>> CORRECT

>>> OR: I appreciate you bending your Friday homework ban.
I want to expose myself to English as much as possible to improve my English.

>>> CORRECT
I am really grateful for your understanding me. Thanks.

>>> I am really grateful for your understanding of me. Thanks.

1. Wish
- I wish that I lived with great heroes in the Bible.

>>> I wish that I lived with the great heroes in the Bible.
- My father wished that he had been much wiser enough to make a lot of money in his youth.

>>> CORRECT
- He left after saying to us, \"Wish me luck\"

>>> He left after saying to us, \"Wish me luck.\"

RE: PUNSTUATION MARK

2. Hope
- He is hoping for a promotion.

>>> CORRECT
- We hope to see you soon

>>> We hope to see you soon.

RE: PUNSTUATION MARK
- I hope that the economy will come around soon.

>>> CORRECT

>>> OR: I hope that the economy will recover soon.

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