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학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon, Teacher!
We only have one day to talk to each other in December and I will miss your beautiful voice and face. ^^*
Take care!
See you tomorrow!
P.S.: There are a lot of things that I have to rush up until tomorrow.
I feel again that I can't eat my cake and have it. ㅜㅜ
강사 첨삭
[이름],
First of all, I forgot that you will be going on a trip!
OMG!! When I read your message, I was really shocked because it
totally got out of my mind. I must have been getting old.
Anyhow, I wish you a very Merry Christmas in another country and
a prosperous New Year. Please keep safe and I will be waiting
for your return my dear.^^ Don\'t forget to take a lot of pictures!^^~~Teacher Erine~~
Good afternoon, Teacher!>> Correct
We only have one day to talk to each other in December and I will miss your beautiful voice and face. ^^*
>> CorrectTake care!
>> CorrectSee you tomorrow!
>> CorrectP.S.: There are a lot of things that I have to rush up until tomorrow.
>> CorrectI feel again that I can\'t eat my cake and have it. ㅜㅜ
>> I feel that I can\'t eat my cake and have it again. (Adverb placement)
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