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2015-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good afternoon, Teacher! We only have one day to talk to each other in December and I will miss your beautiful voice and face. ^^* Take care! See you tomorrow! P.S.: There are a lot of things that I have to rush up until tomorrow. I feel again that I can't eat my cake and have it. ㅜㅜ

강사 첨삭

[이름], First of all, I forgot that you will be going on a trip! OMG!! When I read your message, I was really shocked because it totally got out of my mind. I must have been getting old. Anyhow, I wish you a very Merry Christmas in another country and a prosperous New Year. Please keep safe and I will be waiting for your return my dear.^^ Don\'t forget to take a lot of pictures!^^~~Teacher Erine~~ Good afternoon, Teacher!>> Correct We only have one day to talk to each other in December and I will miss your beautiful voice and face. ^^* >> CorrectTake care! >> CorrectSee you tomorrow! >> CorrectP.S.: There are a lot of things that I have to rush up until tomorrow. >> CorrectI feel again that I can\'t eat my cake and have it. ㅜㅜ >> I feel that I can\'t eat my cake and have it again. (Adverb placement)

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