Compositioon
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher Erine,
Happy New Year!
Today was our first class and I was excited to see you.
Moreover, I was happy and touched to hear that you will send me a greeting card.
I am very thankful for you and I will let you know if I get it. ^^
I want to write more but there are almost 300 mails waiting to be handled.
I want to cry. ㅠㅠ
That is all for today because of my tasks and see you tomorrow! ^^
Have a nice day!
강사 첨삭
Dear [이름],
First of all, I really feel sorry for having known about your 300 emails.
I know that you had to attend to them and I am worried that your fingers
and wrists might be tired today due to overusage. Try to soak it in cold
water to reduce stress.
Second, it is just a greeting card so please don\'t expect much.
Hence, the letter I put there is meaningful to me.
See you later my dear [이름].
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear Teacher Erine,
>> CorrectHappy New Year!
>> CorrectToday was our first class and I was excited to see you.
>> This day was our first class and I was excited to see you. (If you are talking about this day but will use the past verb, better change it with \"this day\")Moreover, I was happy and touched to hear that you will send me a greeting card.
>> CorrectI am very thankful for you and I will let you know if I get it. ^^
>> CorrectI want to write more but there are almost 300 mails waiting to be handled.
>> CorrectI want to cry. ㅠㅠ
>> CorrectThat is all for today because of my tasks and see you tomorrow! ^^
>> CorrectHave a nice day!
>> Correct
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