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2016-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Dear Teacher Erine, Happy New Year! Today was our first class and I was excited to see you. Moreover, I was happy and touched to hear that you will send me a greeting card. I am very thankful for you and I will let you know if I get it. ^^ I want to write more but there are almost 300 mails waiting to be handled. I want to cry. ㅠㅠ That is all for today because of my tasks and see you tomorrow! ^^ Have a nice day!

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름], First of all, I really feel sorry for having known about your 300 emails. I know that you had to attend to them and I am worried that your fingers and wrists might be tired today due to overusage. Try to soak it in cold water to reduce stress. Second, it is just a greeting card so please don\'t expect much. Hence, the letter I put there is meaningful to me. See you later my dear [이름]. ~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear Teacher Erine, >> CorrectHappy New Year! >> CorrectToday was our first class and I was excited to see you. >> This day was our first class and I was excited to see you. (If you are talking about this day but will use the past verb, better change it with \"this day\")Moreover, I was happy and touched to hear that you will send me a greeting card. >> CorrectI am very thankful for you and I will let you know if I get it. ^^ >> CorrectI want to write more but there are almost 300 mails waiting to be handled. >> CorrectI want to cry. ㅠㅠ >> CorrectThat is all for today because of my tasks and see you tomorrow! ^^ >> CorrectHave a nice day! >> Correct

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