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2016-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good morning, Teacher! If i were invisible, I would sleep all day! Whenever it is Wednesday, I feel more tired and want to get some sleep. Well, it seems like it is a Wednesday sickness. You usually sleep less then I do but apparently, you are always energetic. What is the secret to maintaining a good condition? I like seeing your perky look every day. ^^ By the way, these days, we had a free talk but you don't need to care about it. Whatever we talk about, I can learn a lot of things from our conversation. Anyway, that is all for today and see you tomorrow! Take care! ^^

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Hello, [이름]!^^ Thank you for the compliment as well as the thing I\'m concerned about. I am just worried that you may think I\'m not teaching the book anymore. However, I feel happy that you still learn some things during our class though we have different topics everdyday!^^ I want you to stay healthy, focused and determined in anything you will do so you can finish your tasks! That is my utmost secret in having my energy!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectIf i were invisible, I would sleep all day! >> Correct [I like it, too!]Whenever it is Wednesday, I feel more tired and want to get some sleep. >> Correct Well, it seems like it is a Wednesday sickness. >> CorrectYou usually sleep less then I do but apparently, you are always energetic. >> CorrectWhat is the secret to maintaining a good condition? >> Correct [All I do is drink coffee, take a power nap if I have a chance and eat right.]I like seeing your perky look every day. ^^ >> CorrectBy the way, these days, we had a free talk but you don\'t need to care about it. >> CorrectWhatever we talk about, I can learn a lot of things from our conversation. >> CorrectAnyway, that is all for today and see you tomorrow! >> CorrectTake care! ^^ >> Correct

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