Compositioon
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher!
If i were invisible, I would sleep all day!
Whenever it is Wednesday, I feel more tired and want to get some sleep.
Well, it seems like it is a Wednesday sickness.
You usually sleep less then I do but apparently, you are always energetic.
What is the secret to maintaining a good condition?
I like seeing your perky look every day. ^^
By the way, these days, we had a free talk but you don't need to care about it.
Whatever we talk about, I can learn a lot of things from our conversation.
Anyway, that is all for today and see you tomorrow!
Take care! ^^
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!^^
Thank you for the compliment as well as the thing I\'m concerned about.
I am just worried that you may think I\'m not teaching the book anymore.
However, I feel happy that you still learn some things during our class though
we have different topics everdyday!^^
I want you to stay healthy, focused and determined in anything you will do
so you can finish your tasks!
That is my utmost secret in having my energy!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> CorrectIf i were invisible, I would sleep all day!
>> Correct [I like it, too!]Whenever it is Wednesday, I feel more tired and want to get some sleep.
>> Correct Well, it seems like it is a Wednesday sickness.
>> CorrectYou usually sleep less then I do but apparently, you are always energetic.
>> CorrectWhat is the secret to maintaining a good condition?
>> Correct [All I do is drink coffee, take a power nap if I have a chance and eat right.]I like seeing your perky look every day. ^^
>> CorrectBy the way, these days, we had a free talk but you don\'t need to care about it.
>> CorrectWhatever we talk about, I can learn a lot of things from our conversation.
>> CorrectAnyway, that is all for today and see you tomorrow!
>> CorrectTake care! ^^
>> Correct
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