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Good evening, Teacher! Here in Korea, it is very cold. The temperature is negative 8 degrees Celsius. It is my time to go home but somehow, I am scared of going out. ^^;; Today, snow fell for a while and I am worried if I will face icy roads outside. Fortunately, roads to my home are flat. As long as I don't put my hands into my pockets while I am walking I will not encounter any embarrassing situations. By the way, I finished my tasks early and I could take a rest during my working hours. I can't predict what will happen tomorrow so I am going to submit my composition in advance before going home. I am very hungry now so I have got to have dinner. ^^ Rest well and see you tomorrow! ^^**

Hi, [이름]!^^ I heard that it is very cold in your country now. Keep your body in shape and you won\'t have any sickness there. Also, be careful while you are walking because I believe it is also slippery. I was very glad when you said you finish the tasks early!^^I hope you can also do that today. See you! ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good evening, Teacher! >> CorrectHere in Korea, it is very cold. >> Correct The temperature is negative 8 degrees Celsius. >> CorrectIt is my time to go home but somehow, I am scared of going out. ^^;; >> CorrectToday, snow fell for a while and I am worried if I will face icy roads outside. >> Correct or>> Today, snow fell for a while and I am worried I might face icy roads outside. Fortunately, roads to my home are flat. >> CorrectAs long as I don\'t put my hands into my pockets while I am walking I will not encounter any embarrassing situations. >> CorrectBy the way, I finished my tasks early and I could take a rest during my working hours. >> CorrectI can\'t predict what will happen tomorrow so I am going to submit my composition in advance before going home. >> CorrectI am very hungry now so I have got to have dinner. ^^ >> CorrectRest well and see you tomorrow! ^^** >> Correct