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학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher!
I have a question.
Do you have durian chips there?
I really like having that and I bought a lot of durian chips when I came back from Bangkok.
Almost every day, I eat them after dinner and I can't stop eating them.
It seems like I am addicted to its heavenly taste.
However, I found that a lot of pimples are coming out on my forehead and I guess they are caused by having durian chips a lot.
I had not eaten snacks before I met them, especially stir-fried chips but durian chips are an exception for me. ㅠㅠ
As I know, oily foods can cause pimples to get worse.
That is why I have stopped eating that with tears from two days before and the symptom is getting better.
I can say that this situation is a kind of torture for me. ㅠㅠ
Well, let me face it. ^^;;
See you tomorrow! ^^
강사 첨삭
Hey, Durian-taste lover, [이름]!^^
I have heard about the durian chips but I\'m not sure where to buy them.
As far as I can remember, I haven\'t seen any of those here in the city I am working for.
While I was reading your composition, I thought that you were like a kid
who really likes something!^^ kkk
Thanks for sharing!^^~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> CorrectI have a question.
>> Correct
Do you have durian chips there?
>> CorrectI really like having that and I bought a lot of durian chips when I came back from Bangkok.
>> Correct (I think we have it but not here in Baguio.)Almost every day, I eat them after dinner and I can\'t stop eating them.
>> CorrectIt seems like I am addicted to its heavenly taste.
>> CorrectHowever, I found that a lot of pimples are coming out on my forehead and I guess they are caused by having durian chips a lot.
>> However, I found that a lot of pimples are coming out on my forehead and I guess they are caused by having a lot of durian chips. (sentence pattern)I had not eaten snacks before I met them, especially stir-fried chips but durian chips are an exception for me. ㅠㅠ
>> CorrectAs I know, oily foods can cause pimples to get worse.
>> CorrectThat is why I have stopped eating that with tears from two days before and the symptom is getting better.
>> That is why I have stopped eating that with tears from two days ago and the symptom is getting better. (before vs. ago)I can say that this situation is a kind of torture for me. ㅠㅠ
>> CorrectWell, let me face it. ^^;;
>> CorrectSee you tomorrow! ^^
>> Correct
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