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Hello, [이름]!^^
While I was reading your message, it came to my mind that
you are really older than I am!^^ kkkk
But don\'t you worry, for you, your pouch is the most important thing
that you shouldn\'t forget but it happened today.
In my case, last Tuesday, I forgot to wear my second most important
thing (aside from my intimates), my belt!^^ kk
We are indeed getting older but I think, we have to live our lives to the fullest!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear Teacher,
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A happy Friday to you!
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It seems like weekend always makes me happy and energetic.
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Even though I don\'t have a special plan, just the thought of taking a rest on the weekend gives me energy.
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I suddenly remembered what you said during our class.
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\"We are getting order.\"
>> \"We are getting older.\" (Spelling)
Oh my god, I forgot to bring my pouch!!!!!!!!
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Indeed, it is signs of ageing. ㅠㅠ
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What can I do for myself?
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It seems like I am naked.
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Now, my lips are pale and I even look like the Mona Lisa because of my half of remaining eyebrows.
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Fortunately, there is a pencil and it can be a alternative.
>> Fortunately, there is a pencil and it can be an alternative. (Article usage)
Well, I need to go to a cosmetic store to put on basic make-up with samples.
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At this moment, I need to be brave! Hahaha
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Erine, I hope you won\'t be like me. ^^;;
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That is all for today and have a great weekend!
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Take care! ^^
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