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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear my Teacher,
Good morning!
First of all, I am sorry for being negative.
When it is Monday, I somehow feel down.
Don't worry about it.
I will come to normal very soon! ^^
I just hope you didn't get influenced by me badly.
By the way, we talked about the movie entailed 'The Girl Who Leapt Through Time' during our class.
If you have a chance, you can also watch 'Love Letter'.
Through this movie, you can have some time to recall your first lover and school days. ^^
I am not fond of Japanese movies but these two movies are worth to recommend.
I am just worried about where you can get these old movies.
If it is hard for you to get them, it is a good way for me to send you.
Anyway, thank you for giving me good energy! ^^
See you tomorrow!
강사 첨삭
To my dearest, [이름]!^^
I do understand the negativity that Monday gives us
but the negativity a while ago was unexpected.
As you always tell me, we only live once.
So why do we need to be negative if we can overcome it
with positive thoughts and way of thinking.
Bear this in mind.
See you!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear my Teacher,
>> CorrectGood morning!
>> CorrectFirst of all, I am sorry for being negative.
>> CorrectWhen it is Monday, I somehow feel down.
>> CorrectDon\'t worry about it.
>> CorrectI will come to normal very soon! ^^
>> It will come back to normal very soon.
I just hope you didn\'t get influenced by me badly.
>> CorrectBy the way, we talked about the movie entailed \'The Girl Who Leapt Through Time\' during our class.
>> CorrectIf you have a chance, you can also watch \'Love Letter\'.
>> CorrectThrough this movie, you can have some time to recall your first lover and school days. ^^
>> Correct (OMG. I might feel nostalgic!)I am not fond of Japanese movies but these two movies are worth to recommend.
>> CorrectI am just worried about where you can get these old movies.
>> Correct (Downloading would be easy, don\'t you worry.)If it is hard for you to get them, it is a good way for me to send you.
>> Correct (But how???)Anyway, thank you for giving me good energy! ^^
>> CorrectSee you tomorrow!
>> Correct
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