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학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher!
Today, I can feel that you are a good daughter again.
I can't really say that you are being selfish even if you go for a vacation instead of going to your hometown.
Someone (It seems like it is me.) just goes on a trip without hesitation and guilt but you are not like that.
It already proves that you are considerate.
It is okay for you to be more selfish.
No one can't live your life for you.
My own life is the most important and precious thing.
After getting married, do you think you are available to go traveling in freedom?
The moment you become a mother, I am sure you will be regretful for not enjoying your life to the fullest just because of your family.
Well, you mother will be happy to see you happy.
I hope you can stop bothering yourself. ^^
Take care and see you! ^^
강사 첨삭
My dear, [이름]!
You have been very helpful, as always.
I have been bothered and after talking with you, I felt the feeling of relieved.
However, I can\'t promise you that I am not going to bother myself anymore since
I am also having PMS that adds up to my crazy mind. kkk
Thanks for being there.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> CorrectToday, I can feel that you are a good daughter again.
>> CorrectI can\'t really say that you are being selfish even if you go for a vacation instead of going to your hometown.
>> Correct Someone (It seems like it is me.) just goes on a trip without hesitation and guilt but you are not like that.
>> CorrectIt already proves that you are considerate.
>> CorrectIt is okay for you to be more selfish.
>> CorrectNo one can\'t live your life for you.
>> CorrectMy own life is the most important and precious thing.
>> CorrectAfter getting married, do you think you are available to go traveling in freedom?
>> After getting married, do you think you are available to go traveling freely? The moment you become a mother, I am sure you will be regretful for not enjoying your life to the fullest just because of your family.
>> CorrectWell, you mother will be happy to see you happy.
>> Well, you mother will be happy to see you happy. I hope you can stop bothering yourself. ^^
>> CorrectTake care and see you! ^^
>> Correct
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