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Dear my sweet Teacher Paula, Good day. It is very cold today, so I am wearing a duck-down jumper. And I wore many pieces of thin clothing before I leave home. Now, the temperature is -7 degrees Celsius, but it feel like -14 degrees Celsius. This is an unusual temperature, and it is below average for the time of year. Now, I have to start considering my heating bills. See you. *Essay In my case, computer has made my life easier and more convenient. Usually, when I need some daily necessities, I do internet shopping. I can not only buy something chipper than offline shops, I can also save my time, because they deliver the goods which I buy through internet shops to my house for free. Moreover, I have a friend who lives in China. Whenever I want to talk to her, I reach her using my computer. It seems to feel like talking to her close to her. Lastly, computer has a huge capacity to save my data. It is very useful for me to look up my data, whenever I need it.

Dear my sensible Student [이름],   A great evening to you! Thank you for making your homework. Just be careful with some errors. Be careful with your Grammar. You should always consider the choosing correct vocabulary words. As a whole, you did a good job! Keep it up! Anyway, have a great evening! Take care always! ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~   Dear my sweet Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good day. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good day! It is very cold today, so I am wearing a duck-down jumper. >> CORRECT! And I wore many pieces of thin clothing before I leave home. >> I also wore many pieces of thin clothing before I left home. (It is better to use ALSO than AND. LEAVE should be LEFT, because your sentence is concentrated in the past.) Now, the temperature is -7 degrees Celsius, but it feel like -14 degrees Celsius.>> Now, the temperature is negative 7 degrees Celsius, but it feels like it\'s negative 14 degrees Celsius. (SUBJECT-VERB AGREEMENT: It feels ...) This is an unusual temperature, and it is below average for the time of year. >> CORRECT! Now, I have to start considering my heating bills.>> CORRECT! See you.>> CORRECT! >> OR: See you!   *Essay In my case, computer has made my life easier and more convenient. >> CORRECT! Usually, when I need some daily necessities, I do internet shopping. >> CORRECT! I can not only buy something chipper than offline shops, I can also save my time, because they deliver the goods which I buy through internet shops to my house for free. >> I can not only buy something cheaper than in offline shops. I can also save my time, because they deliver the goods which I bought through internet shops to my house for free. (CHIPPER should be CHEAPER.) >> OR: I can not only buy something cheaper than in offline shops. I can also save my time, because they deliver the goods which I bought online to my house for free. Moreover, I have a friend who lives in China. >> CORRECT! Whenever I want to talk to her, I reach her using my computer. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Whenever I want to walk to her, I can reach her using my computer. It seems to feel like talking to her close to her. >> It seems like I\'m talking close to her. Lastly, computer has a huge capacity to save my data.>> CORRECT! It is very useful for me to look up my data, whenever I need it. >> CORRECT!