Compositon

Hi teacher Charlie Please correct the sentences below. 6. I would like to consult with a professor on the whole about my research program. I would like to begin a preliminary experiment, exchanging an on-site survey with literature documentation, if required. And I prepare and conduct a full-scale experiment based on the result. Then I summarize a result to report and to argue whenever experiments finished. If a presentation of a conference can be performed, I would like to make it at various places. 7. My greatest strength is my ability to ruminate deeply. I think that concentrating deeply leads to conversion of the way of thinking, and it is helpful to create research idea. And I am a direction which often follows the rule in a group because conflict can be minimized by following rules. My weakness is that I ask many questions about the high interest field. Although it is not bad, for the side which answers, it may be painful.

Hello [이름]! ^^   Here you go! ^^ Your writing is getting so much better. ^^   See you later!   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==     6. I would like to consult with a professor on the whole about my research program. >> CORRECT   I would like to begin a preliminary experiment, exchanging an on-site survey with literature documentation, if required. And I prepare and conduct a full-scale experiment based on the result. Then I summarize a result to report and to argue whenever experiments finished. >> I would like to begin with a preliminary experiment wherein, if required, I would convert an on-site survery into a write-up. I would then prepare and conduct a full-scale experiment based on the result. After that, I would summarize the results ready for report and defense.   If a presentation of a conference can be performed, I would like to make it at various places.>> If given the chance to present it at conferences, I would like to present at various places.     7. My greatest strength is my ability to ruminate deeply. >> CORRECT >>OR: One area that I especially excel in is my ability to ruminate deeply.   I think that concentrating deeply leads to conversion of the way of thinking, and it is helpful to create research idea. And I am a direction which often follows the rule in a group because conflict can be minimized by following rules. >> I think that being able to concentrate deeply helps our creative way of thinking that is helpful in generating research ideas. I am also know to go with the flow when working with a team because this will minimize any conflict that can arise.   My weakness is that I ask many questions about the high interest field. Although it is not bad, for the side which answers, it may be painful. >> One area that I\'ve been working on is my being too inquisitive wherein I ask numerous questions about a field I am highly interested in. This may not be so bad on my part but for the person who is on the receiving end, it might be viewed negatively.