Compostion

Dear my Teacher Paula, First, I am sorry that I was unable to take our class. Yesterday, I had to serve a huge number of guests, so I didn’t put our class on hold. At that time, I was so busy, that I couldn’t care about anything. In addition, when I realized the moment that I would take our class soon, the time that I can put our class on hold was already past. It was really a shame that I could not take it, but it was an avoidable situation. Now, I am really tired, because I stayed up all night, so I could not sleep even one minute yesterday. I am sorry, but I would have to put our class on hold to take some rest. Thanks for your understanding and concern about my situation. See you next Monday and have a nice weekend! [이름]

Dear my beautiful and restless Student [이름],   A restful and enjoyable Friday to us! ^.^   You made me happy by making your composition. I really wanted to know the things that happened to you last night. I was a little worried, because I know that the previous happening would make you very busy. I was right.   By the way, don\'t worry about me. I am okay with the postponement of our class today. I am glad that you want to take some rest. Rest well and don\'t think a lot! ^^   That\'s all for now! ^^, Have a good weekend! ^^ See you on Monday! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! First, I am sorry that I was unable to take our class. >> CORRECT! >> OR: First, I am sorry that I couldn\'t take our class yesterday. Yesterday, I had to serve a huge number of guests, so I didn’t put our class on hold. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Yesterday, I had to serve a huge number of guests, so I couldn\'t put our class on hold. >> OR: I had to serve a huge number of guests, so I couldn\'t put our class on hold. At that time, I was so busy, that I couldn’t care about anything. >> CORRECT! In addition, when I realized the moment that I would take our class soon, the time that I can put our class on hold was already past. >> In addition, when I realized the moment that I would take our class soon, the time that I could put our class on hold was already passed. (C1 You cannot use CAN in your sentence. It should be COULD.) >> BETTER: In addition, when I realized the moment that I would take our class soon, the time that I could put our class on hold had already passed. It was really a shame that I could not take it, but it was an avoidable situation. >> It was really a shame that I could not take it, but it was an unavoidable situation. (C2 I think you forgot to connect UN in the beginning of AVOIDABLE.) >> OR: It was really a shame that I could not take it, but it was unavoidable. Now, I am really tired, because I stayed up all night, so I could not sleep even one minute yesterday. >> CORRECT! I am sorry, but I would have to put our class on hold to take some rest. >> CORRECT! Thanks for your understanding and concern about my situation. >> CORRECT! See you next Monday and have a nice weekend! >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you on Monday and have a nice weekend! [이름] >> CORRECT!