compostion: appropriate age for dating?

2013-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Basically, I think that there is no a specific age range for dating. It does not matter whether you are a teenager, in your 20’S, in 30’s or in 40’s. Even you are in your 60’s or 70’s, you can still date someone. However, looking at couples who are in their 20’s and early 30’s, I feel that I want to go back to the times when I was in their ages because the couples dating look gorgeous. More than anything else, the youth itself is bright enough to fade away any other tangible things like wealth, experience, etc. Youth is precious more than anything else. How beautiful is youth! How bright it gleams with its illusions, aspirations, dreams! I have happened to see elderly couples dating, kissing, hugging each other, but the scenes did not look good to me. Although there isn’t anything we cannot try to begin regardless of age, there is a best timing to do. So does the dating.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Sir [이름]! Finally, it\'s Friday! Your favorite day! I am sure that you are really excited for the weekend. How was your day? Thank you for sending this in.^^ You have a point, age doesn\'t matter when it comes to dating as long as you are having a great time. Meeting different people will help you to become a better person, do you agree with me? See you in class! Take Care! Teacher Nina Basically, I think that there is no a specific age range for dating. >> Basically, I think that there is no specific age for dating. It does not matter whether you are a teenager, in your 20’S, in 30’s or in 40’s. >> It does not matter whether you are a teenager, in your 20\'s, 30\'s or in 40\'s. OR >> It doesn\'t matter if your are a teenager or you are at the age of 20\'s, 30\'s or 40\'s. Even you are in your 60’s or 70’s, you can still date someone. >> Even you are in your 60\'s or 70\'s, you can still date someone. However, looking at couples who are in their 20’s and early 30’s, I feel that I want to go back to the times when I was in their ages because the couples dating look gorgeous. >> However, looking at couples who are in their 20\'s and early 30\'s, I feel that I want to go back to the time when I was at their age because the couples who are dating look gorgeous. More than anything else, the youth itself is bright enough to fade away any other tangible things like wealth, experience, etc. >> Correct! Youth is precious more than anything else. >> The youth is more precious than anything else. How beautiful is youth! >> How beautiful the youth is! How bright it gleams with its illusions, aspirations, dreams! >> Correct! I have happened to see elderly couples dating, kissing, hugging each other, but the scenes did not look good to me. >> I happened to see an elderly couple dating, kissing, hugging each other, but the scene did not look good to me. Although there isn’t anything we cannot try to begin regardless of age, there is a best timing to do. So does the dating. >> Although there isn\'t anything we can\'t try to begin regardless of age, there is a best time to do it so does with dating.

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