Compostion: learning from books vs. experience

2013-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

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Learning from experience is the best way to learn. Some of us feel after passing out from school or college, we have acquired knowledge completely or we are masters in our field. I think the knowledge we acquire from school and college is nothing but minimal and that we have covered only a tip of the iceberg. It is better than learning from books for a couple of reasons. First of all, after you learn something from a book, the difficult part is performing it in reality. You can master the skills you learnt from a book via the hands-on experience. Secondly, you will never forget what you have learnt from your experience. Think about riding a bicycle. Once you learnt riding a bicycle, it does not matter how long it passed, you can still ride. We can understand life only through experience. We learn a lot from people with whom we have an acquaintance. The ultimate knowledge cannot be got from just reading the books.

강사 첨삭

Hi there again Sir [이름]^^ Thank you for sending this in.^^ Great ideas! SUPERB! I totally agree with you that learning is not just from books. There are people who don\'t go to school because they believe that they can survive through experience. Hands on is the best way for us to learn even in medical field. One more day to go before weekend. I know you are really excited. See you! Teacher Nina Learning from experience is the best way to learn. >> Correct! >> OR: Learning from experience is the best way. >> OR: Experience is the best teacher. Some of us feel after passing out from school or college, we have acquired knowledge completely or we are masters in our field. >> Some of us feel that after graduating from a school or college, we acquired a complete knowledge or we are already masters in our field. I think the knowledge we acquire from school and college is nothing but minimal and that we have covered only a tip of the iceberg. >> I think the knowledge we acquired from school and college, is nothing but minimal and that we only covered the tip of the iceberg. It is better than learning from books for a couple of reasons. >> Learning from experience is better than from books for a couple of reasons. First of all, after you learn something from a book, the difficult part is performing it in reality. >> Correct! You can master the skills you learnt from a book via the hands-on experience. >> You can master the skills you learnt from a book via hands-on experience. >> OR: You can master the skills you learnt from a book via experience. Secondly, you will never forget what you have learnt from your experience. >> Correct! Think about riding a bicycle. >> Correct! Once you learnt riding a bicycle, it does not matter how long it passed, you can still ride. >> Once you learnt riding a bicycle, it does not matter how long it has passed. We can understand life only through experience. >> Correct! We learn a lot from people with whom we have an acquaintance. >> We learn a lot from people whom we had an acquaintance with. The ultimate knowledge cannot be got from just reading the books. >> Ultimate knowledge can\'t be acquired just from reading books.

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