Compulsory military service
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How was it during your time in the military? I\'m sure it\'s very different before compared to your son\'s time. Let\'s talk about it in class. See you!
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~T. Lynn
In many countries, military service is compulsory.
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Korea is no exception.
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On the one hand, I think why do we forced to go in the army?
>> On the other hand, why are we forced to go to the military?
On the contrary, what would happen if we are not to go in the army?
>> On the contrary, what would happen if we do not to go in the army?
In essence, let\'s think about this problem.
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Suppose any country in the world don\'t have troops.
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Will it be no war?
>> Will there be war?
Will people live peaceful?
>> Will people live peacefully?
Wouldn\'t people have the ambition of invasion?
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I think the answer is \"no\".
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Troops isn to be done to protest the country from other invasion.
>> Troops aren\'t done to protect the country from others invasion.
There are two different military services.
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One is compusory, the other is volunteer military system.
>> One is compulsory and the other is voluntary military system.
Volunteer military system needs many natioal budget.
>> Voluntary military system needs a big national budget.
Before the decision, it takes into account the national economy.
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Anyway I think troops is presence.
>> Anyway, I think troops should be present.
If it is not, will it be peace, or war? that is question.
>> If it is not present in a country, would there be peace or war? That is the question.
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