Computers might be bad for people’s health

Hi there Sir [이름]!

A wonderful day to you!

Gadgets made our lives easier but of course, I agree with you.

There are still times that we feel lonely even if we have all of those inventions.

It is more important to spend time with family rather than using those.

I definitely agree with you that we should free ourselves from such gadgets at times.

We can talk about this later in class. Hihihihi. Have a great day.

Teacher Nina

We are now living in the world that it is hard to imagine for us to live and work without a computer.

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>> OR: We are now living in the world that it is difficult to imagine to live and work without a computer.

At work or at home, we all are heavily dependent on computers.

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Like many new technologies and inventions did, when a computer was first invented, people expected our life to be much more convenient, productive, and easier, so we could have more spare time to enrich our life.

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We dreamed of paperless world thanks to the brilliant feature of electronic data storage capability of the computer.

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However, have such new technologies or gadgets brought us a better life than before.

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On the contrary, we live with overwhelmed amount of paper these days.

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Some people actually miss the time when there were no such gadgets.

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>> Some people actually miss the time when there were no such kinds of inventions.

We were much happier than now with no such technologies.

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Although we can stay connected with friends and family almost anywhere, anytime via an ever-growing number of electronic devices, we still feel more lonely.

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We should free ourselves from such gadgets and enjoy slow living.

>> We should free ourselves from such gadgets and enjoy our slow living life.

>> We should free ourselves from those gadgets and enjoy our simple life.