Computers today can quickly and accurately translate languages, therefore, it is a waste of time to
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The main purpose of conversation commune with each other. Although, computer can translate all language, it can\'t translate emotion. I have ever tried to use Google translator before but the performance of it is not enough and there are a lot of mistakes, mistranslation on it that can\'t understand. It can be useful when we go abroad, if we couldn\'t speak it\'s own language at all. But we can solve minimal problem. So, learning foreign language is still important to communicate with others. In addition, we can make a lot of friends if we can speak the local language because people usually feel favorable to someone who can speak their language and know their cultures. However, it is not easy to learn a second language. There should be a lot of efforts to become fluent. Even though, we need to put a lot of efforts, we can gain more and more advantages by learning it.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
The main purpose of conversation commune with each other.
>>> The main purpose of conversation to commune with each other.
Although, computer can translate all language, it can\'t translate emotion.
>>> Although, computer can translate all languages, it can\'t translate emotions.
I have ever tried to use Google translator before but the performance of it is not enough and there are a lot of mistakes, mistranslation on it that can\'t understand.
>>> I have ever tried to use Google translator before but the performance of it is not enough and there are a lot of mistakes, mistranslation on it that can\'t be understand.
It can be useful when we go abroad, if we couldn\'t speak it\'s own language at all.
>>> CORRECT
But we can solve minimal problems.
>>> CORRECT
So, learning foreign language is still important to communicate with others.
>>> CORRECT
In addition, we can make a lot of friends if we can speak the local language because people usually feel favorable to someone who can speak their language and know their cultures.
>>> CORRECT
However, it is not easy to learn a second language.
>>> CORRECT
There should be a lot of efforts to become fluent.
>>> CORRECT
Even though, we need to put a lot of efforts, we can gain more and more advantages by learning it.
>>> CORRECT
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