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We are very interested to participate in BMT for OTN equipment in Atlanta which will hosted by Ciena.
>>We are interested to participate in BMT for OTN equipment in Atlanta, which will be hosted in Ciena.
We think that in order to jumpstart our new project, we should get together and try to come up with some new ideas
>>Correct
Therefore, After testing and checking about OTN equipment from your BMT,
We believe that Anycomm would derive significant benefits as your partner at this event.
>>Correct
Here is the details you requested on the BMT
>>Here are the details you requested on the BMT:
5. Estimated Sales : The OTN project is estimated at more than 3 million dollars within next three to five years.
>>5. Estimated Sales: The OTN project is estimated to be more than 3 million dollars within three to five years.
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