Conflicts make a cost
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Hello there [이름],
Thank you for your time again.
I totally agree with you.
Conflicts can lead to accidents too.
We should know how to handle it and fixed it immediately.
Have a great day.
Teacher Nina
We are in conflicts with other people everyday.
>> Did you mean: We can have a conflict with other people everyday.
>> OR: Conflicts happen everyday.
It occured on a road, company, restaurant and so on.
>> It may occur on the road, company, restaurant and so on.
Maybe, It can cause a fight with friend in school.
>> Correct!
It can make you feel dizzy If it occurred it your company.
>> Did you mean: It can make you feel uncomfortable if it occured in your company. ( What do you mean by dizzy? ^^ Please explain it in class. )
It can make an accident on the roads.
>> It can cause accidents on the road.
Probably, there will be some casualties.
>> Correct!
From these conflicts, we have to pay the cost about the result of these.
>> Did you mean: Becuase of these conflicts, we have to be open about the consequences.
The first thing we have to pay is emotion.
>> The first thing we have to pay for is the emotion.
we feel sad or angry, after arguing with friends or neighbors.
>> Correct!
Even we feel sick and It can develop to disease.
>> We even feel sick and it can develop to a disease.
the most critical thing is the truth that It can make scar in our mind which couln\'t be erased forever.
>> The most critical thing is the truth that it can make a bad memory which couldn\'t be erased forever.
The second thing is money.
>> Correct!
we have to compensate what we have done.
>> Correct!
the cost is dependant on Who\'s fault, but it only reduce your cost, not meaning you don\'t have to pay even a part of the cost.
>> Did you mean: The cost depends on who\'s fault, but it can only be reduced.
For example, We can easily find the situation from car accident.
>> Did you mean: For example. we can find out what happened from a car accident.
It is very costly and make people scar on their mind.
>> It is very costly and make a memory on a person\'s mind.
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