Congratulation on passing the exam.
학생이 쓴 원문
These days, the most thing which makes me happy is the words "Congratulation on passing the exam.". If I will achieve it, I would be happy as well as people who admire me would be. The reason why they hope that is because my dramatic situation, which I knocked off the neck of bottle from my birth to date such as my disabled and even divorced parents, few poverty, but my mind was affluent. Moreover if I will grab the chance, it seems that all of peaple lived over the whole world probably are going to be happy.
Postscript
I was really sorry for today's lesson. I actually drunk a draught of my beer, tonight. I swore it just one shot. Even I should have prepared for our class. It was the worst class I made. Please, applogize me. I told you I would kill two birds with one stone rather, but I held nothing due to grasp two much at once.
So, for the next class, I decided the topic about the poems "Immigrants(wrap their babies..)" and "Push and Pull(Like many who..)" Let's discuss it bye
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
I do hope that you will be able to pass your test. Just believe in yourself and I know that you can do it. Anyway, I would like to thank you for sending your composition today. I think you need to be extra careful the next time that you will be drinking, okay? :) Please be guided with the corrections that I made below. If you have any questions, feel free to ask them to me later in our class. Have a wonderful day ahead. :)
T. Chloe
These days, the most thing which makes me happy is the words \"Congratulation on passing the exam.\".
>>These days, the thing which makes me happy are the words, \"Congratulations for passing the exam.\".
>>These days, the best thing which makes me happy is the expression, \"Congratulations for passing the exam.\".
If I will achieve it, I would be happy as well as people who admire me would be.
>>If I will achieve that, I would be happy, as well as the people who admire me.
The reason why they hope that is because my dramatic situation, which I knocked off the neck of bottle from my birth to date such as my disabled and even divorced parents, few poverty, but my mind was affluent.
>>The reason why they are hoping for that is because of my dramatic situation, that is, I knocked off my neck from the bottle to date as my disability and I have divorced parents, we are experiencing poverty, but my mind is affluent.
Moreover if I will grab the chance, it seems that all of peaple lived over the whole world probably are going to be happy. >>Moreover, if I will grab that chance, it seems that all the people who live all over the world are probably going to be happy.Postscript
>>CORRECT!I was really sorry for today\'s lesson.
>>CORRECT!
I actually drunk a draught of my beer, tonight.
>>I actually drunk a draught of beer tonight.
I swore it just one shot.
>>I swore it was just one shot.
Even I should have prepared for our class. >>CORRECT!
It was the worst class I made.
>>CORRECT!
Please, applogize me.
>>Please, accept my apology.
I told you I would kill two birds with one stone rather, but I held nothing due to grasp two much at once.
>>I told you I would kill two birds with one stone but rather, I held nothing because I grasp too much at once.So, for the next class, I decided the topic about the poems \"Immigrants(wrap their babies..)\" and \"Push and Pull(Like many who..)\"
>>CORRECT!
Let\'s discuss it bye
>>Let\'s discuss these. Bye.
>>Let\'s discuss this in our next class. Bye!
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