Conposition

2018-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. make it big  2. adage  3. aggravating 4. down to earth  5. keep your feet on the ground I will make it big in the software industry eventually. There are so many adages regarding effort. My previous boss was so aggravating. I need to be down to earth and keep my feet on the ground, so that I will focus on what I can do.

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I will make it big in the software industry eventually.

>> or: It would be only a matter of time before I make it big in the software industry.

 There are so many adages regarding effort.

>> or: Countless adages about effort have been written.

 My previous boss was so aggravating.

>>or:  My former supervisor seriously got on my nerves.

 I need to be down to earth and keep my feet on the ground, so that I will focus on what I can do.

>> or: I reckon that I have to be down to earth and keep my feet on the ground to accomplish my objectives.




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