Conposition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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I will make it big in the software industry eventually.
>>
or: It would be only a matter of time before I make it big in the software
industry.
There are so many adages regarding effort.
>>
or: Countless adages about effort have been written.
My previous boss was so aggravating.
>>or:
My former supervisor seriously got on
my nerves.
I need to be down to earth and keep my feet on the ground, so that I
will focus on what I can do.
>> or: I reckon that I have to be down to earth and keep my feet on the ground to accomplish my objectives.
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