consideration and rights

2026-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

It isn\'t natural that other should respect and consider my religious custom. We must not to demand unconditionally everywhere. In school cafeteria might to provide alternative food to allergic students. I don\'t want to serve special foods religious people because religion is a personal choice. So they have to manage their rules.

강사 첨삭

Ms [이름]!

I understand this opinion because personal beliefs often come with personal responsibilities. Finding a balance between respecting religious practices and practical limitations is important. However, it should be fair like, people going to theri country should be free to eat pork as well, then it would be a fair society.

Aki~

It isn\'t natural that other should respect and consider my religious custom.
>>> I don\'t think it\'s natural to expect everyone to respect and accommodate my religious customs.

We must not to demand unconditionally everywhere.

>> We shouldn\'t expect special treatment everywhere we go

In school cafeteria might to provide alternative food to allergic students.

>> School cafeterias should provide alternative meals for students with food allergies.

I don\'t wa nt to serve special foods religious people because religion is a personal choice.
>> I don\'t think schools or restaurants should be required to serve special meals for religious reasons because religion is a personal choice.

So they have to manage their rules.

>> Therefore, people should take responsibility for following their own dietary rules.

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