Consolation

2010-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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This afternoon,I have to go the Injae hospital funeral hole to console the bereaved wife who lost her husband a few days ago. I think it’s better to go with other friends of mine than by myself alone, so a friend mine who has a car suggested that I meet them at the subway station in Haewundae to go there by his car. The bereaved wife has worked with her husband in their own large plantation, producing green teas, plums, persimmons and etc. I am very anxious about her how she will run the large one without her husband’s hands. - to be continued -

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [Name]! I am so sorry to hear about what happened to your friend. I can say that you are such a good friend that you worry about how she could continue their family business without the aid of her husband. Anyways, just pray for your friend that she will be able to pass all the obstacles that can come her way now that her husband is gone. Yours truly, [이름]   This afternoon, I have to go the Injae hospital funeral hall to console the bereaved wife who lost her husband a few days ago. >>correct I think it’s better to go with other friends of mine than by myself alone, >>correct so a friend mine who has a car suggested that I meet them at the subway station in Haewundae to go there by his car. >>correct The bereaved wife has worked with her husband in their own large plantation, producing green teas, plums, persimmons and etc. >>correct I am very anxious about her how she will run the large plantation without her husband’s hands.>>correct - to be continued

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