Construct your own sentences using the following words.

2012-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Judy

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1. desirable This smart phone is very desirable. 2. respiration The oxygen is necessary to respiration. 3. kinetic This machine is convert to kinetic energy from the potential energy.

강사 첨삭

Hi and nice work here =) You were able to use the correct meaning of the words in your sentences, just a bit of review on the subject and verb agreement, also the article \"the\" should give you more improvement. Have a  wonderful time, thanks again, and see you in class =) -Teacher Aurora =) Construct your own sentences using the following words. 1. desirableThis smart phone is very desirable. >>> Correct >>> OR: I find this smart phone very desirable.2. respirationThe oxygen is necessary to respiration. >>> Oxygen is necessary for respiration. >>> OR: Oxygen is necessary to respire.3. kineticThis machine is convert to kinetic energy from the potential energy. >>> This machnine converts kinetic energy from potential energy.

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