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TGIF!! I hope you enjoy the weekend!! Thanks for your composition!!
REMEMBER:
The battle over whether to use which or that is one many people struggle to get right. It's a popular grammar question and most folks want a quick rule of thumb so they can get it right.
Here it is:
Restrictive Clause뾗hat
A restrictive clause is just part of a sentence that you can\'t get rid of because it specifically restricts some other part of the sentence. Here\'s an example:
Gems that sparkle often elicit forgiveness.
The words that sparkle restrict the kind of gems you\'re talking about. Without them, the meaning of the sentence would change. Without them, you\'d be saying that all gems elicit forgiveness, not just the gems that sparkle. (And note that you don\'t need commas around the words that sparkle.)
Nonrestrictive Clause뾚hich
A nonrestrictive clause is something that can be left off without changing the meaning of the sentence. You can think of a nonrestrictive clause as simply additional information. Here\'s an example:
Diamonds, which are expensive, often elicit forgiveness.
Alas, in a woman\'s world, diamonds are always expensive, so leaving out the words which are expensive doesn\'t change the meaning of the sentence.
Now that you've learned the rule, let's put it to a test:
1. The iPad (which/that) connects to the iCloud was created by Apple.
2. The issue of Writer's Digest (which/that) has Brian A. Klems' picture on the cover is my favorite.
The correct answers are:
1. The iPad, which connects to the iCloud, was created by Apple. (All iPads connect to the iCloud, so it's unnecessary information.)
2. The issue of Writer's Digest that has Brian A. Klems picture on the cover is my favorite. (Your favorite issue of Writer's Digest isn't just any issue, it's the one with me on the cover.)
See you on Monday!!
~Teacher Megan~
HERE ARE MY CORRECTIONS:
These days, I was contacting new supplier from china. it was good chances to practice my chinese with the chinese.
>> These days, I was contacting a new supplier from China. It is a good chance to practice my Chinese speaking ability.
our company has one plant which manufactures sealant that used for ad construction material made by silione.
>> Our company has one plant which manufactures sealant that is used for ad construction materials made of silicone.
and our plant originally sources raw material from American manufacturer, but their supply of the items is so tight nowadays,
>> and our plant originally source raw material from an American manufacturer, but their supply is so tight nowadays.
So our salesperson asked me to contact chinese manufacturer to import that item within one month from now.
>> So our salesperson asked me to contact a Chinese manufacturer to import that item one month from now.
Fortunately I found and contacted two manufacturers, the biggest manufacture in China.
>> Correct.
however, I couldn\'t get a competitive quotation since Chinese market price is quite cheaper than Korean domestic market.
>> However, I couldn\'t get a competitive quotation since Chinese market price is quite cheaper than Korean domestic market.
it has $0.5 of price gap between them. the only thing I have had was talking with the chinese fluently.
>> It has $0.5 price gap between them. The only thing I gain was talking with the Chinese manufacturers fluently.
it would be good experience whenever I call to chinese maker for the first time.
>> It would be good experience whenever I call the Chinese manufacturer for the first time.
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