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It뭩 my pleasure to read it. I뭢 having a great time,
I뭠l send you the last page, too.
The most important aspact of me is the confidence.
>> The most important aspect of me is confidence.
Before, I had a fright to speak English with foriners.
>> Before, I am afraid to talk to foreigners using English language.
However, now I have over come the awesome by visiting an English country.
>> However, now I overcame it by visiting an English-speaking country.
Nowadays even singing pop-song and conversing with forieners have become my favorit hobbies.
>> Nowadays, I even sing pop songs and I love talking to foreigners.
>>
Nowadays, singing pop songs and talking to foreigners became one of my favorite hobbies.
I'm
distinctly sure that I can be a great diplomat official who engages in trading,
studying, valenteering.
>> I뭢 distinctly sure that I can be a great diplomat official who engages in trading, studying, and volunteering.
Among diverse activities, particularly I focus on Cultural exchange.
>> Correct
That is my philosophy and I'm going to adhere to my thought.
>> COrrect
So, I'll be an authentic global leader, Thank you for listening my introducing
>> So, I뭠l be an authentic global leader, thank you for reading my introduction.
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