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Buddhist socialism, which is claimed by Manhae is not the class revolution of Marxism but the social transformation through the realization of Buddhist land, the equality of mercy by universal life of enlightenment.
>>Buddhist socialism, which is claimed by Manhae, is not the class revolution of Marxism but the social transformation through the realization of Buddhist land, the equality of mercy by universal life of enlightenment.
But in all of these Zen was emphasized first.
>>But in all of these, Zen was emphasized first.
Especially it was rejected superstition and claimed right belief in mind practicing.
>> Especially, it rejected superstition and claimed right belief in mind practicing.
Right belief emphasizes social participation while telling faith with enlightenment and combining academic skills.
>>CORRECT!
Individual mind practicing is like the source of spring, and social progress is like a river flowing from it.
>>CORRECT!
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