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The other one of interesting insurance is key insurance,
First time I laugh when I heard that insurance service.
I didn’t understand why that insurance company provide weird insurance service.
But I can realize why it needs, when a closed the door then automatically locked.
So whenever going out, I should consider that my key is in my pocket or not.
If you going out and leave the key in the house. it is quite simple problem, call a key repair store and open it.
But if you lose your key, it is very serious situation.
Most of all, key repair store did not duplicate(copy) the key, without house owner’s agreement. And if you live in an apartment and lost main gate key, then you should make up for all of neighbor’s key and key box replacement.
Therefore, I think we have 3 kinds of options to avoid that kinds of terrible situation
1. buy own house
2. bind key and your body by chain
3. buy weird insurance
Adnrea, could you tell me your choice?
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This is the continuation of my correction:
Therefore, I think we have 3 kinds of options to avoid that kinds of terrible situation
The other one of interesting insurance is key insurance,
>> One other interesting insurance is the key insurance.
First time I laugh when I heard that insurance service.
>> I laughed on the first time I heard this insurance service.
I didn’t understand why that insurance company provide weird insurance service.
>> I didn’t understand why that insurance company provides a weird insurance service.
But I can realize why it needs, when a closed the door then automatically locked.
>> But I realized why it became a need, when I closed the door it will be locked automatically.
So whenever going out, I should consider that my key is in my pocket or not.
>> So whenever I go out, I should make sure that my key is in my pocket.
If you going out and leave the key in the house. it is quite simple problem, call a key repair store and open it.
>> So whenever I go out, I should make sure that my key is in my pocket.
If you going out and leave the key in the house. it is quite simple problem, call a key repair store and open it.
>> If you went out and left the key in the house, it is quite a simple problem, call a key repair store and open it.
But if you lose your key, it is very serious situation.
But if you lose your key, it is very serious situation.
>> But if you lose your key, it is a very serious situation.
Most of all, key repair store did not duplicate(copy) the key, without house owner’s agreement.
Most of all, key repair store did not duplicate(copy) the key, without house owner’s agreement.
>> Most key repair shops are not allowed to duplicate the key without the consent of the owner of the house.
And if you live in an apartment and lost main gate key, then you should make up for all of neighbor’s key and key box replacement.
>> If you live in an apartment and you lost your main gate key, you should call your neighbor and borrow their key.
Therefore, I think we have 3 kinds of options to avoid that kinds of terrible situation
>> Therefore, I think we have 3 options to avoid the terrible situation:
1. buy own house
1. buy own house
>> Correct
2. bind key and your body by chain
2. bind key and your body by chain
>> Bind the key in your body with a chain
3. buy weird insurance
3. buy weird insurance
>> buy a weird insurance
Adnrea, could you tell me your choice?
Adnrea, could you tell me your choice?
>> Andrea, could you tell me your choice?
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