Continue to write the letter to the teacher Grace
학생이 쓴 원문
best for students. I'm not smart. So repeated grammer errors were found through my speaking. I admit that I was lack of diligence. That's why homeworks and compositions were not conducted everyday. However, I tried to read the textbook in advance, and keep in mind your feedback as much as possible. I wish you were not tortured as talking to me every night. I guess that our class time was the busiest hour to you among your schedules. How about good teachers? You're a very good teacher to me. Many feedbacks and repeated corrections were great nutritions to me. I enjoyed to be nurtured as having classes with you. As far as I'm concerned, good teachers encourge students to doing their best for approaching their dream. What I'm doing is to absorb English to be fluent. The journey was funny and memorable to me because of you. I really appreciate it. I will register the class again on May. However, I concern situation can be changed on that time. If your schedule is booked fully, or if I have
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for this wonderful remarks about me. I appreciate your effort in this essay! ^^
I am also worried about the schedule... However I believe that God has good plans for you.
Even if I\'m not your teacher, I think you can be good with your classes.
I will surely miss you! I\'ll see you tomorrow! Cheerios!
Teacher Grace
best for students.
>> ... when do teachers become favorable to their students.
I\'m not smart. So repeated grammer errors were found through my speaking.
>> I\'m not smart so I keep on repeating grammar errors that you also hear during our conversations.
I admit that I was lack of diligence.
>> I admit that I lack the diligence.
That\'s why homeworks and compositions were not conducted everyday.
>> That\'s why homeworks and compositions are given everyday.
However, I tried to read the textbook in advance, and keep in mind your feedback as much as possible.
>> However, I try to read the lesson ahead of time and keep in mind the feedback that you give as much as possible.
I wish you were not tortured as talking to me every night.
>> I wish you\'re not tortured when you talk to me every night.
I guess that our class time was the busiest hour to you among your schedules.
>> I guess that our class time is the busiest time for you among your other classes.
How about good teachers? You\'re a very good teacher to me.
>> Correct
Many feedbacks and repeated corrections were great nutritions to me.
>> Your feedback and corrections are of great help for me.
I enjoyed to be nurtured as having classes with you.
>> I enjoyed being nurtured as I take classes with you.
As far as I\'m concerned, good teachers encourge students to doing their best for approaching their dream.
>> As far as I\'m concerned, good teachers encourage their students to do their best for them to achieve their dreams.
What I\'m doing is to absorb English to be fluent.
>> Correct
The journey was funny and memorable to me because of you.
>> The journey was funny and memorable for me because of you.
I really appreciate it. I will register the class again on May.
>> Correct
However, I concern situation can be changed on that time. If your schedule is booked fully, or if I have
>> However, I\'m concerned of the situation during that time. What if your schedule is full?
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