continue2 about my family
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The next is about my mother.
>> The next topic is about my mother.
My mother persistently pushes us, my brother and me to study.
>> My mother persistently pushes me and my brother to study.
I mean she is passionate in education.
>> Correct
For example, she gave me an opportunity to go where I wanted to visit a foreign country so muh.
>> For example, giving me an opportunity to go to other countries that I want to visit.
Like this she always complies with my wish that is related to English.
>> She always complies with my wishes when it뭩 related to English.
I think she made me speak english fluently and major in English.
>> I think she helped me speak English fluently and majored in English.
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