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2016-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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13 Korean universities and NIIED are really expecting meeting with MSRT's and Iranian university faculty members for building a strong relationship between great two countires' higher education. Since I have a meeting with Korean university faculty members on Sep 1st, it would be a great idea if you reply your plan by Aug. 31. (FYI. I have attached a draft plan of the D-day from my side. This is just a draft plan and I am totally open for your suggestions.) Look forward to hearing from you. Best Regards, Kyungnam Yun(Mr.)

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Hello, Mr. [이름]! ^^Thank you very much for writing in our composition board. I have proof-read your email as you have requested. I hope this would be very helpful for you. Good luck and God bless. :) ~Teacher Charry 13 Korean universities and NIIED are really expecting meeting with MSRT\'s and Iranian university faculty members for building a strong relationship between great two countires\' higher education.>> The thirteen Korean universities and the NIIED are really looking forward to the meeting with the MSRT\'s and Iranian university faculty members. This is for building a strong relationship between great two countires and their higher education.Since I have a meeting with Korean university faculty members on Sep 1st, it would be a great idea if you reply your plan by Aug. 31.>> Since I have a meeting with a Korean university faculty members on September 1st, it would be great if we receive a reply from you regarding your plan on August 31.(FYI. I have attached a draft plan of the D-day from my side. This is just a draft plan and I am totally open for your suggestions.)>> I have attached a draft plan for the D-day from my side. This is just a draft plan and I am totally open for your suggestions.OR >> Attached to this email is a draft plan for the D-day from my side. This is just a draft plan and I am totally open for suggestions.Look forward to hearing from you.>> We look forward to hearing from you.OR >> We look forward to your immediate response in relation to this matter. Best Regards,>> Best regards,Kyungnam Yun(Mr.) >> Mr. [Name]

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