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학생이 쓴 원문
First, Enviroment is very very important for living
Even though some people did not know that
For protectiong Eargh for we live in there always, we are made a market.
Where can transaction that CARBON EMISSION RIGHT ( is this correct name in eglicsh ? 탄소배출권)
At this point, though transaction on that it can protect earth
one country where consume so many carbon that means is the country
have contribute to atmosphere pollution
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강사 첨삭
Continuation…
First, Enviroment is very very important for living>>First, the environment is very important for living.Even though some people did not know that>> CorrectFor protectiong Eargh for we live in there always, we are made a market.>>To protect the Earth since we are living in it, we made a business.Where can transaction that CARBON EMISSION RIGHT ( is this correct name in eglicsh ? 탄소배출권)>> It is about the proper transaction of Carbon emission.At this point, though transaction on that it can protect earth>>Carbon trading is proven to protect the earth.one country where consume so many carbon that means is the country have contribute to atmosphere pollution >>One country consumed a lot of carbon and contributed to atmosphere pollution or air pollution.Continued on the next composition..
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