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2011-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Dominic

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oh you corrected my essay quickly^^ now i am in the subway to my home actually dominic.. i also will not be able to study with you again today.it is main reason that i write.. Actually i feel so sorry to do like that..Maybe you think i am so lazy student or can not control my schedule for our study..More truely..you may think this situation is not bad^^because you don't have to teach me during our study broken^^;;(I am also teacher,so i know teacher is a normal person who likes to take a break^^;) Anyway today's my poor excuse is meeting my boy friend. i want to say again i am sorry^^;

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [Name], I'm sorry to hear about what happened between you and your boyfriend. As for the class, sure breaks are good, but I think it is also important that my students learn and improve themselves before anything else. Anyway thanks for sending in this second compo!  J See you later! J P.S. I hope your evening went great! -Dominic-   oh you corrected my essay quickly^^ >>Oh you corrected my essay immediately. ^^ now i am in the subway to my home >>I am now in the subway on my way home. actually dominic.. >>Actually Dominic..  i also will not be able to study with you again today. >>I also will not be able to study with you again today. it is main reason that i write.. >>It's the main reason for this composition. Actually i feel so sorry to do like that.. >>Actually I don't feel good doing it. Maybe you think i am so lazy student or can not control my schedule for our study.. >>You probably think that I am a lazy student or I can't control my schedule for our class. More truely..you may think this situation is not bad^^ because you don't have to teach me during our study broken^^;; >>Moreover, you may think this situation is not bad after all because you don't have to teach me whenever I miss class. (I am also teacher,so i know teacher is a normal person who likes to take a break^^;) >>(I am also a teacher so I know just like any other person you would also like to take a break ^^;)Anyway today's my poor excuse is meeting my boy friend. >>Anyway, today's poor excuse is because I'm meeting my boyfriend. i want to say again i am sorry^^; >>Again I want to say I'm sorry.^^ TITLE: Continuing >>Continuation  

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