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oh you corrected my essay quickly^^ now i am in the subway to my home
actually dominic.. i also will not be able to study with you again today.it is main reason that i write..
Actually i feel so sorry to do like that..Maybe you think i am so lazy student or can not control my schedule for our study..More truely..you may think this situation is not bad^^because you don't have to teach me during our study broken^^;;(I am also teacher,so i know teacher is a normal person who likes to take a break^^;)
Anyway today's my poor excuse is meeting my boy friend.
i want to say again i am sorry^^;
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Hi Ms. [Name],
I'm sorry to hear about what happened between you and your boyfriend. As for the class, sure breaks are good, but I think it is also important that my students learn and improve themselves before anything else. Anyway thanks for sending in this second compo! J See you later! J
P.S. I hope your evening went great!
-Dominic-
oh you corrected my essay quickly^^
>>Oh you corrected my essay immediately. ^^
now i am in the subway to my home
>>I am now in the subway on my way home. actually dominic..
>>Actually Dominic..
i also will not be able to study with you again today.
>>I also will not be able to study with you again today.
it is main reason that i write..
>>It's the main reason for this composition. Actually i feel so sorry to do like that..
>>Actually I don't feel good doing it.
Maybe you think i am so lazy student or can not control my schedule for our study..
>>You probably think that I am a lazy student or I can't control my schedule for our class.
More truely..you may think this situation is not bad^^ because you don't have to teach me during our study broken^^;;
>>Moreover, you may think this situation is not bad after all because you don't have to teach me whenever I miss class.
(I am also teacher,so i know teacher is a normal person who likes to take a break^^;)
>>(I am also a teacher so I know just like any other person you would also like to take a break ^^;)Anyway today's my poor excuse is meeting my boy friend.
>>Anyway, today's poor excuse is because I'm meeting my boyfriend. i want to say again i am sorry^^;
>>Again I want to say I'm sorry.^^
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>>Continuation
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