continuing to watch movie

2017-05-04 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I like watching movie. When I was in high school student, I had ever watched all movies on showings. I have a lot ever surprised about imagination and creativity of film director. It's also a way to change the world. I go to movie theater to watch movie, but I often watch it at home. Cable TV shows a lot and various kind of movie. I especially like watching thriller and myth movies. I don't have enough money in the past, so I couldn't continuously watch movie. But now, I don't have enough time, so I couldn't it. I feel dizzy and physically ill, if I watch movie for a long time. Sometimes I nod off while watching movie. I feel dizzy watching two or more movies at home. I am get tired. I miss my youth.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

It has been a while since I read your last composition. I guess you really just stayed home yesterday, huh? Well, I love watching movies too. It\'s how I escape from reality from time to time. When I was younger and I had more time, I usually had movie marathon during the weekend. That is, I watched one movie after another continuously for a day or two. But now, I think aside from not having enough time, movies now are not as good as before. Enjoy your long weekend! See you on Monday!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I like watching movie.

>> I like watching movies.

When I was in high school student, I had ever watched all movies on showings.

>> When I was a high school student, I had watched all movies that was shown.

I have a lot ever surprised about imagination and creativity of film director.

>> I was very surprised about the imagination and creativity of the film directors.

OR>> I was amazed by the  imagination and creativity of the film directors.

It\'s also a way to change the world.

>> correct!

I go to movie theater to watch movie, but I often watch it at home.

>> I go to the movie theater to watch a movie, but I often watch it at home.

Cable TV shows a lot and various kind of movie. I especially like watching thriller and myth movies.

>> Cable TV shows various kind of movies. I especially like watching thriller and myth movies.

I don\'t have enough money in the past, so I couldn\'t continuously watch movie.

>> I don\'t have enough money in the past, so I couldn\'t continuously watch movies.

But now, I don\'t have enough time, so I couldn\'t it. I feel dizzy and physically ill, if I watch movie for a long time.

>> But now, I don\'t have enough time, so I couldn\'t watch either. I feel dizzy and physically ill if I watch movies for a long time.

Sometimes I nod off while watching movie. I feel dizzy watching two or more movies at home. I am get tired. I miss my youth.

>> Sometimes I nod off while watching a movie. I feel dizzy watching two or more movies at home. I get tired. I miss my youth.

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