Control And Hide My Anger
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was younger, it was hard that control and hide my anger for me, because I was so young.
So I had to express my anger to solve my feelings.
But now I become more logical and grow up than that.
I can tell my real feelings and control my anger.
Of course, I sometimes can\'t control, but I try to control and hide my anger while talking.
We should speak kindly for me and for others.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Well done in submitting your homework regularly.
These corrections aim to improve the clarity and grammatical accuracy of the text. I hope it helps.
Sincerely,
^^ T. Ara
When I was younger, it was hard that control and hide my anger for me, because I was so young.
>>> When I was younger, it was hard for me to control and hide my anger because I was so young.
So I had to express my anger to solve my feelings.
>>> So, I had to express my anger to deal with my feelings.
But now I become more logical and grow up than that.
But now I become more logical and grow up than that.
>>> But now, I have become more logical and mature.
I can tell my real feelings and control my anger.
I can tell my real feelings and control my anger.
>>> I can express my true feelings and control my anger.
Of course, I sometimes can\'t control, but I try to control and hide my anger while talking.
Of course, I sometimes can\'t control, but I try to control and hide my anger while talking.
>>> Of course, there are times when I can\'t control it, but I try to manage and conceal my anger while talking.
We should speak kindly for me and for others.
We should speak kindly for me and for others.
>>> We should speak kindly to me and to others.
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